Wednesday, 11 February 2015

Eternal Love? - A poem


Eternal Love? - A poem

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Your oozing richness

Heavenly sweetness

Lures me

 My eternal love

"Stop!" head screams

"Go race!" orders heart, the clever one

I hold to feel

Softness smooth

Moment next

Piece of you

Missing from plate

Slips into mouth

Becomes my aide

In the journey to fat

Our Love-Hate bond

Persists forever









9 comments:

  1. Hehe. I don't think the addiction would persist forever. Maybe just this life. Great poem.

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    1. Haha.. That's a good one!
      Thank you for liking the poem!

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  2. Oh! Vidya you summed it up perfectly.

    Love your poem and good take on the prompt.

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    1. Thank you Inderpreet!
      I am glad you liked it!

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  3. Chocolate is good for the heart as the new survey says so. Indulge with guilt.and so is life.

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  4. That's the kind of love that will find a place under the forever category. :) Loved it Vidya. :)

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    1. Thank you Vinitha for dropping by!

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  5. He he he, looks like that is one hard-to-resist temptation ;) Nice take, Vidya.

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